Great question! It can definitely feel unnatural at first to write an essay without sharing your own opinion, but shifting your mindset is the key to mastering this task.
Here are a few ways to write objectively, based on your lesson:
- Act like a judge, not a debater: As the lesson mentions, a judge doesn't rule based on personal feelings; they decide based solely on which side presented the stronger case. Your job is only to evaluate the proof in front of you.
- Focus on how they argue, not what they argue: Instead of asking yourself, "Do I agree with this topic?", ask yourself, "Did this author provide facts, statistics, and sound logic, or did they rely on weak claims?"
- Keep personal experiences out: Avoid using "I," "me," or stories from your own life. For example, if the topic is about year-round schooling, do not mention your own school days. Stick strictly to what is written in the passages.
- Use analytical phrasing: Frame your sentences around the authors and their evidence rather than your own thoughts.
Here is a quick comparison:
Avoid (Personal): "I think year-round school is a terrible idea because kids need a break in the summer."
Use (Analytical): "The author of Passage A builds a stronger argument because they support their claim with data from a three-year study, whereas Passage B relies primarily on emotional appeals."
Whenever you start writing a sentence, ask yourself the lesson's tip: "Am I explaining why one argument's evidence is stronger?" If the answer is yes, you are on the right track!